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Advice that many if not all could use at some point.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 21, 2010 at 2:23 PM
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I love the rain, and I love your poetry.
This poem is like a gentle rain dropping upon the reader's head.
Refreshing.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 21, 2010 at 7:39 AM
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Beautiful poem
and a stunningly wise wish to close it with. Well done, my friend.
posted by
lionreign
on June 21, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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I Really Love this Poetry...
Interesting form and expression.
posted by
WaterKat
on June 21, 2010 at 1:19 AM
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Fantastic poem Sinome, I loved the messages pertained in it. It's true when feelings spin out of control they can turn to hate unfortunately. Thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on June 21, 2010 at 12:15 AM
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Love and Hate
Yes Simone you capture these emotions and spin them into words of wisdom,a pity more do not heed them when the time is nigh.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 20, 2010 at 11:48 PM
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I love the rain, unless I have to be out in it
posted by
Lanetay
on June 20, 2010 at 11:23 PM
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Clouds
Lovely poem Simone, beautifully written/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on June 20, 2010 at 10:23 PM
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