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A lovely poem.

posted by adnohr on June 24, 2010 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

This poem provides a lot of insight to your relationship with your father. You chose the perfect way to go about telling it.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 21, 2010 at 2:09 PM | link to this | reply

I love the way you wrote this.
And you make me love your dad.
What power that gives to writing. 

posted by TAPS. on June 21, 2010 at 7:35 AM | link to this | reply

Dads are valuable, if they're wise. They teach, even if they're not,
one thing or another, positive or negative. Yours, if this poem is any indication, was not only wise, he knew how to lead rather than push. Lucky poet. Very satisfying read.

posted by Pat_B on June 21, 2010 at 7:09 AM | link to this | reply

interesting poem and story you tell

posted by Lanetay on June 20, 2010 at 11:17 PM | link to this | reply

Re: mariposa, Thanks for commenting on one most scary moments my life!

posted by dsm_tchr on June 20, 2010 at 9:59 PM | link to this | reply

It’s your decision, whether to live or die,

but it affects everybody else what you do. 

Even God.

 

This is such a profound statement and sums up the sad thing called "suicide"

posted by mariposa75 on June 20, 2010 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply