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Well done, Marta...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 20, 2010 at 5:31 PM
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Very poignant! Hope you're doing well. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on June 20, 2010 at 8:42 AM
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Sinome
YcVenus Paradise used to offer a paint by number painting that would make a good illustration for this poem. Of course your poem is not the result of following numbers but talent love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 20, 2010 at 7:19 AM
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Sinome - so poignant and it is such a beautiful poem. You have touched my heart. Thanks for the visit my friend.
posted by
shobana
on June 20, 2010 at 12:26 AM
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Wow, Marta
Your loneliness is so touching, memories of colors yet devoid of it in the sadness of the moment. Your poems grip, and sometimes tighten around the neck, and that is a great salute to your poetic skill, my princess
xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on June 19, 2010 at 11:30 PM
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A wonderful expression of loneliness Simone
posted by
C_C_T
on June 19, 2010 at 11:16 PM
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You are not here
Wonderfully written poem..it flowed beautifully through out the poem../LB
posted by
MsJudy
on June 19, 2010 at 9:52 PM
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Sinome
Very beautifully written.........and sad.....but perhaps the absence will make the heart grow fonder
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 19, 2010 at 9:38 PM
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Beautifully written.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 19, 2010 at 8:21 PM
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Sinome
An absence draining the world of its colours - I too have experienced that...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 19, 2010 at 7:12 PM
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I agree with FS I coloured by the moods and tempers of love.
posted by
Kabu
on June 19, 2010 at 5:58 PM
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That special someone can have such an influence on the surrounding scene.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 19, 2010 at 5:19 PM
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