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Hi,
Such variety in your colorful poem. Yiour dad will be all right.
posted by
anib
on June 17, 2010 at 10:58 PM
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(((shobana)))
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 17, 2010 at 7:55 PM
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wow what an imagery (:
posted by
ain_natasha
on June 17, 2010 at 6:55 PM
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Prayers and best wishes for your dad.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 16, 2010 at 8:33 PM
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Wow, I just got through putting the lyrics to the old Jethro Tull song "Locomotive Breath" on my
Trivialities of Living post and then come here and you have train poetry. I love trains.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 16, 2010 at 8:32 PM
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Enjoy every moment...the next moment may never come. Shobana your poem has me pondering, even if one plans will it even change where the cards may fall.
So sorry to here about your Dad. I'll say a prayer for him that his recovery is quick.
You have a great weekend too.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 16, 2010 at 7:54 PM
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Life can sure be like that chaotic trainride...Here's to hoping that your father recovers ASAP.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 16, 2010 at 7:14 PM
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Wishing a speedy recovery to your dad! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on June 16, 2010 at 7:11 PM
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Praying for your dad. That's hard to have a loved one in the hospital, I'm sorry!
posted by
Darson
on June 16, 2010 at 6:30 PM
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I will put your Dad in my prayers! I hope you have a fine weekend in spite of all that is happening! I love your poem, too! The thought of not getting off on the right platform in life so to speak is a bit frightening! Love you Sweetie and I have you in my prayers, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on June 16, 2010 at 5:52 PM
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great poem and story, sorry about your dad, hope he feels better soon
posted by
Lanetay
on June 16, 2010 at 5:19 PM
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Shobana
God Bless your dad and you for writing a nice poem before you go luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 16, 2010 at 4:47 PM
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shobana
Wonderful!!! Hope all is well with your dad.
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on June 16, 2010 at 2:43 PM
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very thought provoking, Shobana, which is always good..:)
all the best to your Dad and your family..
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posted by
Rumor
on June 16, 2010 at 2:39 PM
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good poem...best wishes to your dad
posted by
spiderfly
on June 16, 2010 at 2:09 PM
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Passport
Yes there is a disconcerting side to every thing Shobana. Memory tends to be short lived if it hasn't affected one personally. I suppose it is a survival feature. I though that was a good poem that you had written on John's page. Two in a day. Hope your Daddy is comfortable it must be a joy to him to know that he has loving children. Happy weekend
posted by
C_C_T
on June 16, 2010 at 11:09 AM
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very thought provoking
posted by
Tzippy
on June 16, 2010 at 8:41 AM
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I like this a lot
It's thought provoking and yet still a joy to read.
posted by
lionreign
on June 16, 2010 at 8:29 AM
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shobana
% I take the train soon love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 16, 2010 at 8:27 AM
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Sorry about your Dad darling...wish him well from me here on Blogit
darlin'..........I don't like to think about destination disasters...I have to fly!!!!!!!
posted by
Kabu
on June 16, 2010 at 8:13 AM
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We never really know what our destinations will turn out to be. Some happy, some tragic, some magical. Very good, thought-provoking poem. I pray the best for your family and your dad.
posted by
mariss9
on June 16, 2010 at 7:26 AM
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My good wishes for your dad,hope he is out of the hospital soon. Today young,tomorrow wise........I loved the thought! Unbearable sights of a last month's train wreck still haunt me. Life is indeed fragile,so live the moment!
posted by
shamasehar
on June 16, 2010 at 6:49 AM
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good poem and my best wishes for your dad and family
posted by
Ariala
on June 16, 2010 at 6:05 AM
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