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Wonderful imagery!!
I love Sunset rust, I wish I had thought of that. I loved this! xoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on June 16, 2010 at 8:24 AM
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War Intrudes
Simone...This was so beautiful..you description of you felt was so perfect..thank you for sharing/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on June 15, 2010 at 9:01 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on June 15, 2010 at 7:58 PM
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War always takes away innocence Sinome. Great poem there.
posted by
shobana
on June 15, 2010 at 7:49 PM
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From innocence to jaded reality.so well done.
posted by
Kabu
on June 15, 2010 at 7:48 PM
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You have captured the essence of war being hell.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 15, 2010 at 6:17 PM
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I loved the way you finished this poem it is sad when our innocence goes.. well written
posted by
spiderfly
on June 15, 2010 at 3:11 PM
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