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the feeling i get from this poem is deep pure emotional turmoil...
very well described, and touching to say the least. Very powerful stuff, shows a lot of talent and wisdom, hope you are able to utilize that in a positive way.
posted by
Tzippy
on June 16, 2010 at 8:39 PM
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% Watch the weather. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 16, 2010 at 8:00 AM
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Very descriptive and it does depict a dark cloud as the title suggests! Very deep imagery, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 16, 2010 at 1:11 AM
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like you ...very special.
posted by
Kabu
on June 15, 2010 at 8:32 PM
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Good use of lightening and thunder!
posted by
Straightforward
on June 15, 2010 at 6:13 PM
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Powerful words, well written
posted by
spiderfly
on June 15, 2010 at 3:20 PM
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Oh wow mariss, there is such depth in this poem. Very intense. Great Job. Thank you for the visit and glad you liked.
posted by
shobana
on June 14, 2010 at 11:51 PM
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