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Beautiful indeed to be able to go to the other side of the cloiud riding with you, and to take a peep. Very well said
posted by
anib
on June 17, 2010 at 10:45 PM
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A ride indeed; but I will put this to the test tomorrow when those thunderclouds come rolling in! I am now gettijng an opportunity to come out and read! Jes, my, daughter, but I think you know that, has been here for a couple of days! She got herself into a mess trying to support her now long gone boyfriend! It has taken several months but in less than half a year we have her back on track, and, she paid her car off a month early! But, what a mess! Love you my dear friend and thank you for coming to see me even though I haven't been able to get to your blog! And if I am not mistaken you are first in poetry! Congratulations and KUDOS, the reading will pay dividends! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on June 14, 2010 at 6:00 PM
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Thank you FSI for the visit and have a lovely birthday.
posted by
shobana
on June 14, 2010 at 3:46 PM
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A soothing poem I find this to be. A wonderful ride many wish to take.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 14, 2010 at 2:08 PM
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shobana
ZN You take a good look love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 14, 2010 at 12:10 PM
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Quite a ride :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on June 14, 2010 at 9:46 AM
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gentile is always nice
posted by
Lanetay
on June 14, 2010 at 9:05 AM
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Shobana
Lovely, and one day we will be able to take a ride to the other end of that cloud luv .
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 14, 2010 at 8:27 AM
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Gentle is a good word for this poem
it left me with a gentle smile too - bravo!
posted by
lionreign
on June 14, 2010 at 7:47 AM
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shobana
Watching clouds form and dissolve is a great way of passing the time.
posted by
johnmacnab
on June 14, 2010 at 5:55 AM
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Moral of the story" There's beauty and gentle even in the darkest
situations if we care to look.
posted by
Straightforward
on June 14, 2010 at 1:04 AM
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Re: you have written so beautiful such words put together with such talent...
Hello Kabu, thanks so much darling for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on June 14, 2010 at 12:45 AM
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Re: Gentle
Hi CC, thanks so much for your visit. I do that a lot - just open the window to my soul. OH don't mind me too CC, just say things sometimes and I know you understand me and the person I am. Glad you had that glass of water and I did too before breakfast just like Wiley John said I should..LOL. Have a lovely time read and I'm sorry if I made you feel slighted in any way. Have a lovely day reading.
Oh think I am old too..
posted by
shobana
on June 14, 2010 at 12:41 AM
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Gentle
I thought that you were going to go to the end of the rainbow Shobana but that would have spoiled the effect, perhaps one should not do that when opening the window of their soul.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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posted by
RomaKay
on June 13, 2010 at 9:14 PM
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you have written so beautiful such words put together with such talent...
thank you dear one.
posted by
Kabu
on June 13, 2010 at 8:44 PM
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dsm - beatific?..LOL new word for me. Thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on June 13, 2010 at 3:59 PM
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Shobana, this actually hurts it is so beatific!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 13, 2010 at 3:56 PM
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