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Life and relationships can be that way at times,, the effect at the end was great, you anticipate something and then---nothing. Really fantastic portrayal and mood poem.
posted by
mariss9
on June 15, 2010 at 2:38 PM
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its the suddenly that got me :)
posted by
Tzippy
on June 14, 2010 at 7:37 PM
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You took me on quite an emotional ride with this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 13, 2010 at 3:10 PM
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Yellowrose - All that steam and sweat pouring makes any river hot my dear. I am thinking about the end too. Thanks so much for the visit and always lovely comments.
posted by
shobana
on June 13, 2010 at 3:09 AM
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I will have to agree with Sam/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on June 12, 2010 at 11:54 PM
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yr55, it will come back to you!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 12, 2010 at 10:48 PM
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It felt like a drop at the close! I don't know if it was intentional, but it certainly left me pondering! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 12, 2010 at 10:01 PM
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