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Sinome, it is perfect!  TY!

posted by dsm_tchr on June 23, 2010 at 10:13 PM | link to this | reply

I just saw this and I don't know if its still on... if I am late or not... ( I am so clueless!  )  Well in any event here is my try

Its dark, a cry awakens me.
As I run through the hall towards the nursery door
a million things pass through my thoughts
"Did she fall ??? is she OK???
I did not hear a thump...
but it could be that she fell
 her teddy trying to get...
I should have left it on the bed! 
Maybe she is sick... "
with that I got to the room
and there in her crib was my baby
eyes full of tears...but  big and bright
so glad to see me as she jumped into my arms.
Iooked her over anyway from her toes to her head
and then  something happened that Il never forget
when she lifted her face ... she said "Mommy"... her first word!
and right there in my arms, the bad dream forgotten,
she gave me the most amazing  smile ...so bright
That my friends  was and still is  my most beautiful  sight

posted by Sinome on June 23, 2010 at 9:04 PM | link to this | reply

I don't consider myself a poet, but sometimes I try. I wasn't on your list, but maybe I'll give it a try...

posted by mariposa75 on June 16, 2010 at 10:22 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Former, can you try your hand?

posted by dsm_tchr on June 12, 2010 at 6:05 PM | link to this | reply

I am looking forward to this.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 12, 2010 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

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I thought good, dsm has missed me out, but I see I have been snucked in there Ok It is about light I believe, a good job there are no first seconds or thirds I hate that. I tell you dsm I just Doctored the poem that I was going to post it has a bit of light in it. Please don't ask me to dance.C C.  

posted by C_C_T on June 12, 2010 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply

Here's a terrific poem:  http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/lilane1/661127

posted by dsm_tchr on June 12, 2010 at 10:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Just curious.....
Corbin, Retirement is wnderful, but funds are limited!  Lol Peace!

posted by dsm_tchr on June 12, 2010 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

Just curious.....
can't you afford a second blog?   What does this have to do with news and politics?

posted by Corbin_Dallas on June 12, 2010 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

Such great creative output!

posted by numberonemcfan on June 12, 2010 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

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Here you go darling, thnks so much, it is awesomely beautiful!http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/shobana/

posted by dsm_tchr on June 12, 2010 at 2:14 AM | link to this | reply

dsm - ok, I'm in but I do not know how to paste it like Taps did on your page. Its fun, thank you and I have written a poem now.

posted by shobana on June 12, 2010 at 2:05 AM | link to this | reply

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TAPS, thank you. The mind can see -- stunning and comprehensive!

posted by dsm_tchr on June 12, 2010 at 1:51 AM | link to this | reply

My offering - Go to The Mind Can See When The Eyes Cannot

posted by TAPS. on June 12, 2010 at 12:03 AM | link to this | reply

YEE-HAW!

posted by dsm_tchr on June 11, 2010 at 11:39 PM | link to this | reply

sounds like fun

posted by Lanetay on June 11, 2010 at 11:34 PM | link to this | reply

Contest
Oh goodness, and here I am drier than dry, with a mental block..But I will give it a try, does sound like alot of fun/LB

posted by MsJudy on June 11, 2010 at 11:27 PM | link to this | reply

Let the good times roll.

posted by TAPS. on June 11, 2010 at 10:54 PM | link to this | reply

Teach
I'll try to remember, sounds like fun my friend........

posted by WileyJohn on June 11, 2010 at 10:13 PM | link to this | reply