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Well Shobana This feels as if it has wider implications as if you are portraying emotions that you have felt and now bring into being, it is quite touching as people can relate to such feelings.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 11, 2010 at 9:10 AM
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Woderful! ~
Love is the glue that binds the many verses into a uni-verse
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posted by
anib
on June 10, 2010 at 10:05 PM
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If people are involved then I believe anyone at any time will be betrayed! Wonderful imagery, too! Love you my dear Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on June 10, 2010 at 6:15 PM
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There will come a day that we will have to stand and say we will not give up our faith or be beheaded then and there. I cannot even consider a choice. I must no I will not give up my faith, no ifs ands or buts.
posted by
Justi
on June 10, 2010 at 5:27 PM
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loyalty is special and I hope I am
posted by
spiderfly
on June 10, 2010 at 4:17 PM
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I like to think that I would be loyal through thick and thin.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 10, 2010 at 3:31 PM
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Maybe, maybe not. Who can say.
You give us interesting thing to consider.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 10, 2010 at 2:24 PM
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Shobana
The clandestant corners of life cause one to question and wonder what will be the outcome but with Faith and God alll things are possible.
Blessings to you Shobans wonderful writing.Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on June 10, 2010 at 1:02 PM
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Shobana, we often say "very thought provoking" when commenting on
other writers' posts, but this one goes beyond and is like a verbal wakeup call....
very well done.
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posted by
Rumor
on June 10, 2010 at 12:33 PM
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I like this a great deal
The questions awaken my own answers which in turn brings some tranquility
posted by
lionreign
on June 10, 2010 at 8:10 AM
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More musings from our Muse Queen......well done my darling.
posted by
Kabu
on June 10, 2010 at 7:14 AM
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you just never know in life
posted by
Lanetay
on June 10, 2010 at 7:09 AM
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Shobana
A thoughtful poem that raises questions which will always be with us...And, I am afraid, there will always be reasons for
having to ask them...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 10, 2010 at 6:07 AM
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