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Love this..when we were children my sister's and I would lay and try to count the stars!! And to see if we could name them, was such fun/LB

posted by MsJudy on June 11, 2010 at 11:03 PM | link to this | reply

ooh yes I do have a star we all must have one

posted by spiderfly on June 10, 2010 at 4:15 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome, cherish this!

posted by dsm_tchr on June 10, 2010 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful!
This is such an uplifting piece, thank you for sharing it xoxoxoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on June 10, 2010 at 8:18 AM | link to this | reply

well done darling and a beautiful star it is....sounds as bright as mine.

posted by Kabu on June 10, 2010 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Excellent! And may your star always shine brightly for you...

posted by Nautikos on June 10, 2010 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

Star
I think you have probably chosen the best one Simone, but it is a lovely poem.

posted by C_C_T on June 9, 2010 at 11:17 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Z I like the star of yellow love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on June 9, 2010 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
I shall be blessed with but a glimmer of your star. This is so beautiful, I can see you and the light. Your writing is so awesome. (I have worn out that word on your work)

posted by Justi on June 9, 2010 at 8:25 PM | link to this | reply

How beautiful the yellow star is and I concur with FSI. Just gorgeous imagery Sinome.

posted by shobana on June 9, 2010 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply

He will not find as bright of a star as that of the speaker.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 9, 2010 at 7:32 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Your illuminating Bright Yellow stars shines in this lovely verse Sinome..Keep shining brightely in your writing of the soul. Blessings Fema

posted by fememefeme on June 9, 2010 at 7:30 PM | link to this | reply