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Jane
So sad..she lived a hell of a life but one that she chose, but did not deserve to die/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on June 11, 2010 at 11:09 PM
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Sinome
This is very sad...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 10, 2010 at 6:15 AM
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I feel this is the perfect poem to follow your previous one...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 9, 2010 at 7:32 PM
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Her name was Jane
"We klled her, all of us" ... is very meaningful and a telling comment on how we have, in this materialistic world, become impervious to others' sensibilities. Kudos for this once again. my very dear friend, Marta. xoxoxoxo
posted by
anib
on June 9, 2010 at 7:16 PM
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how sad, and its too bad that this could be a true story these days
posted by
Lanetay
on June 9, 2010 at 4:19 PM
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Your work gets better and deeper and the meaning more profound
all the time....so many lost sad and hopeless people. so many Janes in all the generations.
posted by
Kabu
on June 9, 2010 at 9:46 AM
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SO TOUCHING, WAY TOO MANY JANES IN THIS WORLD, I PRAY HER SOUL HAS FOUND PEACE, YOU ARE SUCH A GREAT WRITER, YOUR WORDS STIR THE EMOTIONS
posted by
Riversidepoet
on June 9, 2010 at 9:41 AM
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How tragic Sinome. Sometimes we turn our backs and regret just a bit too late, it is true. Thank you for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on June 9, 2010 at 12:24 AM
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Jane
Realistic Simone, but I don't know what the answer is
posted by
C_C_T
on June 8, 2010 at 11:22 PM
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sinome
Sad.......This is very, very good.
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on June 8, 2010 at 10:03 PM
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