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GREAT POEM THAT PAINTS A PICTURE
posted by
Riversidepoet
on June 9, 2010 at 10:08 AM
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Shobana, that closing line is fantastic in showing the essence of motor
racing...the entire poem is great, and I feel like I'm at the track as I read and re-read it....
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posted by
Rumor
on June 9, 2010 at 9:39 AM
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sounds like my daughters driving
posted by
Lanetay
on June 9, 2010 at 8:20 AM
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Brilliant imagery
You capture the essence of the event and so our minds can find the detail...
posted by
lionreign
on June 9, 2010 at 8:02 AM
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Hi, Shobana how have you been? Race, speed, danger, passion all captured so well!
posted by
shamasehar
on June 9, 2010 at 7:59 AM
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The best motor race I've ever heard! And without the noise, too.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on June 9, 2010 at 4:08 AM
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Terrain
I hope that you did not do a test run on this poem Shobana I liked the way the tyres were described it was different well most are different but very popular and as Sam said you are number 1. It couldn't go to a nicer person.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 8, 2010 at 11:41 PM
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I thought this was an exquisite write, too! The element of danger gives it its impetus! KUDOS, too! Love you my Shobana! And I saw where you were #1 in poetry, CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!
Your sam
posted by
sam444
on June 8, 2010 at 10:14 PM
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SHOBANA
Something not of the "norm"........very descriptive, very good!!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on June 8, 2010 at 10:00 PM
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Loved the realism in this one Shabana... fabulous descriptive poem. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on June 8, 2010 at 9:55 PM
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Hi Shobs, I did dirt track motorcycle racing for a while, it left me broken at many places, so this is a cherished remembrance of those days you have brought alive.
posted by
anib
on June 8, 2010 at 7:15 PM
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you captured the excitement and the danger...well done darling.
posted by
Kabu
on June 8, 2010 at 7:04 PM
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Shobana, ah, very cool; with a lot of suggested meaning
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 8, 2010 at 6:44 PM
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Re:
Thank you FSI, I think so too.
posted by
shobana
on June 8, 2010 at 5:38 PM
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Races can be so adrenaline-inducing thanks to the danger element.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 8, 2010 at 5:35 PM
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