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Whoa!!! My whole being just got absord by this read. Wow!
posted by
Mystereo
on October 12, 2010 at 5:52 PM
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this stirred my emotions today
posted by
Oceanana
on September 18, 2010 at 5:04 PM
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simple55
G Sensitivity to a physical expression of emotions about the personal situation of the person is appropriate in a social and friendly way as well. The sits on the floor in your poem that’s as sensitive as the emotion of the subject is perceptive to a social moment. I remember the premise of the TV sitcom Friends. Simply it stated in the plot that the friends were there for you. In other words they cared about each other. And, whether done in a light group anywhere or in a personal situation your poem expresses all our need for awareness and appreciation of each person at all levels of acquaintance love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 8, 2010 at 4:03 AM
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Vivid & touching...welcome!
posted by
ash_pradhan
on June 7, 2010 at 5:10 PM
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So sorry, but I forgot to welcome you to Blogit! I believe you will enjoy your time here, many are very supportive! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 7, 2010 at 5:00 PM
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I dare say that was an excellent depiction of clinical depression! Very vivid imagery, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 7, 2010 at 4:58 PM
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