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I was at the library yesterday just meandering around checking out different aisles in the fiction section and I thought of you and began imagining a group of your books on one of the shelves. Hurry up. I'm waiting.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 6, 2010 at 6:25 AM
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Pat
Now I understand the reason for Indian knowing what Jody was going to do next - she would be doing what she'd done in the other situations she'd been watched. Your 'wide spot' on the road conjures up images and widens my imagination. The things I don't know about the USA are bewitching.
posted by
johnmacnab
on June 6, 2010 at 6:06 AM
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Arrg! You're really going to do this? Leave us hangin? Not fair!! (definitely a winner!)
posted by
adnohr
on June 5, 2010 at 8:05 PM
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Great Synopsis for so far and I do think there is a novel here but does it
have to be done in a month? I think that there can be a lot of twists and turns here. India could be a mystery until the end where who he is ...is the final twist in the tale,. I look forward to more.
posted by
Kabu
on June 4, 2010 at 6:38 PM
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PatB
You have so many things going on in your head I can't keep up. LOL I do think you have the terrific beginnings of a great novel there but I have no idea what Indian should have been but why not a simple ex-infantryman that had demolition trainng or something instead of so much ex Seal drama.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 4, 2010 at 6:36 PM
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Pat
Well, this one is already a great yarn and has all the makings of a bestseller - just don't give too much of it away ahead of time...
(This comment ended up in your previous post first...
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posted by
Nautikos
on June 4, 2010 at 7:07 AM
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