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I always feel free when I'm walking alone
through the whispering forest, but...
I never really feel alone because I always feel God's presence there, and...
my spirit soars as if all of me is flying.

posted by TAPS. on June 3, 2010 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
'Tempus fugit' poetically well presented luv

posted by WileyJohn on June 3, 2010 at 8:39 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem, dear
perhaps sometimes we need to feel and grieve and allow ourselves to finally heal xoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on June 3, 2010 at 7:10 AM | link to this | reply

Ah, yes!
A pleasant reverie.
A pleasant reverie, indeed!


Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on June 3, 2010 at 3:27 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Z In this crisp poem the mood of refreshment changes into lament and mellow melancholy. It works for me love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on June 3, 2010 at 2:57 AM | link to this | reply

Flying
Lovely poem Simone, I suppose one has to imagine flight into the blue sky

posted by C_C_T on June 2, 2010 at 11:57 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Oh what joy to fly at will. However, those who love us and we love would not want us to fly because we may never want to stop. Give the memories you want to dissolve to God, he has a way of disintegrating them. Blessings and love to you dear lady.

posted by Justi on June 2, 2010 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

yes it sure is for me anyway

posted by Lanetay on June 2, 2010 at 9:33 PM | link to this | reply

I have found myself wishing for the same as well.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 2, 2010 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome, we can neither hide from our feelings, nor hide our feelings from ourselves for long, such phantom monsters;  yet they are only feelings.  Not blood and guts entities that might kill if provoked.  Nice poem!

posted by dsm_tchr on June 2, 2010 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply

I was just saying to Wiley today that the creatures that fly are
especially blessed. Delightful darling.

posted by Kabu on June 2, 2010 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem - Sometimes I wish for time to fly and other times I wish it would slow down:) Thanks for stopping by.

posted by shobana on June 2, 2010 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply