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Re: CORNCAKE
Well it could be the alarm clock Bill, or the beating heart.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 3, 2010 at 8:12 AM
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CORNCAKE
Z Early morning’s full of sights and sounds from the bed sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 3, 2010 at 2:55 AM
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Re: Simone
Thank you Simone may your dreams be soft and comforting.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 2, 2010 at 11:30 PM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you Shobana may your dreams feel like velvet.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 2, 2010 at 11:26 PM
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jfm thank you, your replies are always so interesting and I know it takes as much effort to write something like you do as it does to plonk a poem down.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 2, 2010 at 11:25 PM
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Thank you I wish I had experienced a teacher like dsm
posted by
C_C_T
on June 2, 2010 at 11:17 PM
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Re: CORNCRAKE Wiley
Yes good idea Wiley make up for the time when we couldn't, right.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 2, 2010 at 11:11 PM
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Re: the dreaming ...I do love your poetry.
Thank you Kabu sweet of you to say so
posted by
C_C_T
on June 2, 2010 at 11:09 PM
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Re: Sam
Thank you Sam sweet dreams
posted by
C_C_T
on June 2, 2010 at 11:05 PM
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Stunning CC... Loved this one the mostest! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on June 2, 2010 at 7:52 PM
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Absolutely gorgeous poem CC. I loved it. Sleep and dreams of velvet, like flowing into another dimension.
posted by
shobana
on June 2, 2010 at 7:38 PM
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Dear Cake,
You have an interesting way of writing about something that never actually appears to exist--except in innuendo. And yet, the disfraction of images seem to have a point, while an-oppositely, we konw they will never meet. And if this were true, there is no way I would venture an opinion....interesting weaves.
posted by
jfm32
on June 2, 2010 at 7:09 PM
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that is a wonderful feeling, expressed very well indeed!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 2, 2010 at 6:48 PM
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CORNCRAKE
I'll take sleep and dreaming whatever time it comes.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 2, 2010 at 6:06 PM
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the dreaming ...I do love your poetry.
posted by
Kabu
on June 2, 2010 at 5:14 PM
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I adore this stanza:
Sleeping as the dawn breaks.
If this is what it takes
to dream and get
the feeling of velvet.
To dream indeed! Another fantastic poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 2, 2010 at 12:56 PM
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