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I have a lost love too, and I think about her most every day, but it's nothing I want to dwell upon. It was there, and it's gone--a wonderful experience. But this poem puts me back into the dumps.
posted by
jfm32
on June 2, 2010 at 8:02 PM
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Sweet Lady
It was supposed to be this way. Be blessed and totally happy.
posted by
Justi
on June 2, 2010 at 4:58 PM
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posted by
lovelyladymonk
on June 2, 2010 at 1:08 PM
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Sinome
JL At least there’s nature’s beauty love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 2, 2010 at 8:30 AM
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more melancholy beauty
You master this tone better than anyone and it is a sad delight to read
posted by
lionreign
on June 2, 2010 at 8:20 AM
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I think
Beautifully written as usual Simone the sad undertones reflect from the poem
posted by
C_C_T
on June 2, 2010 at 12:09 AM
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beautiful..
posted by
Star5_
on June 1, 2010 at 10:21 PM
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So lovely Sinome but there are always lovely new beginnings too. Loved the poem and I have a pen that I got from an uncle when I went away to study years ago. It had my name on it. I keep it safely so I can understand how sentimental your grandfather's pen is to you too. Thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on June 1, 2010 at 8:21 PM
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The pain is really intensely expressed here.
posted by
Kabu
on June 1, 2010 at 7:51 PM
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withouth?
posted by
Nautikos
on June 1, 2010 at 7:09 PM
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Sinome
Yes, it's sad - but how empty our lives would be withouth the loves we lost...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 1, 2010 at 7:08 PM
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Many people are left thinking, "What if?"
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 1, 2010 at 6:28 PM
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Sinome, sad and worth the pain; yet, I cannot help but believe in new love!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on June 1, 2010 at 5:59 PM
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