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Re: mmm! I love the peace that reigns.
Thank you Johnmacnab, nice to see you here too.
posted by
shobana
on June 1, 2010 at 7:17 PM
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Re: shobana
Thank you BCA, Glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on June 1, 2010 at 7:13 PM
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Superb...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 1, 2010 at 6:38 PM
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Nightime
I love the sound of windchimes, sounds so peaceful/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on June 1, 2010 at 6:37 PM
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I would love to have been curled up in bed when I read this for the first time.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 1, 2010 at 6:00 PM
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Well done Sweetie, I could hear it and I loved the close and you, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on June 1, 2010 at 5:12 PM
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I can hear it! Yes, I can hear it.
Lovely sound.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 1, 2010 at 1:44 PM
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mmm! I love the peace that reigns.
posted by
johnmacnab
on June 1, 2010 at 11:12 AM
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Nightime
Yes very soothing Shobana, you could put the day in a cradle and rock it to sleep
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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shobana
R The feeling of peace’s communicated well love. BC-A Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on June 1, 2010 at 6:55 AM
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Thank you mariposa, glad you liked.
posted by
shobana
on May 31, 2010 at 11:32 PM
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Re: Shobana
LOL, cute you are..Good night Wiley John & family!
posted by
shobana
on May 31, 2010 at 11:26 PM
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Shobana
Lovely poem my friend, and now to bed after chasing mouse again. Grrrrrr
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 31, 2010 at 10:54 PM
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you are making me sleepy
posted by
Lanetay
on May 31, 2010 at 10:39 PM
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I love to listen to beautiful sounds falling asleep... windchimes, ocean waves, crickets, and the trees blowing in the wind.
posted by
mariposa75
on May 31, 2010 at 9:28 PM
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Re: Re: Hello Shobs ... sorry I was sleepy, hence the errors
Abanerjee, why do you keep mis-spelling my name..LOL, maybe we should both go the the shock therapy now. Thanks so much for the visit and comment my friend.
posted by
shobana
on May 31, 2010 at 8:58 PM
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Re: Hello Shobs ... sorry I was sleepy, hence the errors
posted by
anib
on May 31, 2010 at 8:46 PM
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Hello Shons
So sweet and soothing, Well done Shobs. Such poems have a lot of value. I am remindid od Macbeth's lines on sleep -
The death of each day's life, sore labor's bath, balm of hurt minds, great nature's second course,chief nourisher in life's feast.
posted by
anib
on May 31, 2010 at 8:45 PM
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It is very gentlerain outside...how wonderfultosleeptothe sound of rain
posted by
Kabu
on May 31, 2010 at 8:30 PM
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Shobana
I can hear the sounds as it is windy here in the desert and the night is aproaching and sleep is indeed near. Love your poem Blessing this Memorial Day.
Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on May 31, 2010 at 7:08 PM
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Yes, the key word is SSSLEEEEPPPP
posted by
Straightforward
on May 31, 2010 at 7:05 PM
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Not bad stuff
Simple and honest as poetry should be
posted by
mantohave
on May 31, 2010 at 4:58 PM
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Lovely lullaby..but where's my teddybear :)? - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 31, 2010 at 4:52 PM
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