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An awesome memory so vivid in verse! So well done, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 2, 2010 at 12:54 PM
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ah memories... where would we be without them...
posted by
PinkWeaver
on June 2, 2010 at 3:58 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Well it is how it happened Bill Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2010 at 12:19 AM
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Re: expressed so very well.
Thank you Symphony I am pleased that you think so
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2010 at 12:17 AM
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Re: I AM HERE Sue
Great Sue, so nice that you are back
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2010 at 12:16 AM
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Re: spiderfly
Yes a bit hairy at the time though, but I vaguely remember this pretty serene face.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2010 at 12:15 AM
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Thank you Shobana No one could dislike your poems they are always distinctly unique, I see the latest is about sleep, I have to go shopping now but will be sure to read it later
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2010 at 12:13 AM
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Re: Corncrake
Thank you Fem I hope this is the finish for you the very best of luck, read your work later
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2010 at 12:08 AM
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Re: memories can be painful delightful ....your words are delightful to this
Thank you Kabu your words are delightful
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2010 at 12:05 AM
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Re: CORNCRAKE
I think the blood was pumping to my face Wiley.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 1, 2010 at 12:04 AM
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CORNCRAKE
Well that there testosterone starts pumpin' early on in a young man's life and before you know it the poetry from a memory just flows beautifully.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 31, 2010 at 10:04 PM
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memories can be painful delightful ....your words are delightful to this
fan.
posted by
Kabu
on May 31, 2010 at 9:20 PM
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Corncrake
Wonderful to be cloked in to the moment of time passing time playing with the curly locks and the discipline and rebuke very emotional and wonderfully done me. Mr.MB Feme (note will be here till Tursday and off to the hospital for back surgery)
posted by
fememefeme
on May 31, 2010 at 7:24 PM
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What a lovely image CC. Just beautifully told. Thanks so much for the visit and am glad you liked the poem.
posted by
shobana
on May 31, 2010 at 4:27 PM
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i needed to read this a couple of times, childhood memories eh
posted by
spiderfly
on May 31, 2010 at 2:59 PM
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I AM HERE
posted by
Star5_
on May 31, 2010 at 12:09 PM
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expressed so very well.
posted by
_Symphony_
on May 31, 2010 at 11:29 AM
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CORNCAKE
u I remember childhood experiences on buses and subways. However you offer a double point of view sir. To say the least excellent. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 31, 2010 at 10:36 AM
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