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Well hello my Shobana! I did not realize you had posted, but I haven't been reading that much either! I really thought the close was a quiet but powerful statement! Love you, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on May 31, 2010 at 1:48 PM
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You have shown us a turbulent plane ride so to speak.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 31, 2010 at 1:47 PM
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Sometimes I think...
some of those teddy bears have better love-lives than some of us bachelors :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 31, 2010 at 1:46 PM
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u Maybe like toys some can be repaired love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on May 31, 2010 at 10:39 AM
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Hi Shobs
I just love your poems, but this one I liked the most. For me it is in the classical mould, absolute class. The way you ended, is fantabulous. My highest admirations to the lady from Kerala, and a great dost of mine
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posted by
anib
on May 31, 2010 at 10:35 AM
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Shobana
You have it so right. We have forgotten how to have boundaries, keep our noses out of the other's business unless asked, then walk softly. To aid and assist can be powerful and come way short of getting into the mental, emotional and secret being of another. I loved it.
posted by
Justi
on May 31, 2010 at 10:05 AM
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interesting poem
posted by
Lanetay
on May 31, 2010 at 9:59 AM
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I like it, especially the ending!
posted by
Ariala
on May 31, 2010 at 6:43 AM
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Shobana
Hi Shobana interesting poem, but rather sad in a way, I had to read it a few times to get the links and then it fell into place and was touching.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 31, 2010 at 6:37 AM
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posted by
_Symphony_
on May 31, 2010 at 6:10 AM
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Beautiful image that one that shows the child in an adult... Fabulous poem :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 31, 2010 at 5:19 AM
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Hugging teddybears
I loved this, your have a special way with words, makes one actually feel what you are saying/LB
posted by
MsJudy
on May 31, 2010 at 3:47 AM
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