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This is a very deep and posed read, very tight surviving!!!!
posted by
Mystereo
on October 1, 2010 at 11:55 AM
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Re: The last 3 lines
Dear John,
First of all thanks for your comment and request for explanation. I try very hard to make my writings and poems easy to read and understand. Anyway here is what I was referring to "slipping below the surface trend"
In Today's economy,many folks cannot pay their bills, the trend is to pay your bills and have plenty or some money left over. One is at the surface if he can pay his bills. He is above the surface if he can afford some of the finer things in life, after expenses. So slipping below the surface trend is not being able to keep the bill collectors away-- you definitely want to loose that. I hope this clarifies the last 3 lines
posted by
csherloc
on May 30, 2010 at 11:06 AM
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I liked the coming to terms with nothing to lose! It is a sure sign of one breaking out of their shell as it were! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 28, 2010 at 7:59 PM
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I like this poem, but I'm confused by the last 3 lines. What is a surface trend? I see you have nothing to loose, and you are arriving at something new that is in relation to where you are coming from. What is it that you want me to see/experience? Is there something below the surface. Even if this were unknowingness, paint that picture...perhaps a concrete image you have already grasped. Does this make sense...let me know,,,,,, John
posted by
jfm32
on May 28, 2010 at 7:26 PM
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Out of Myself
very expressive, I like it..LB
posted by
MsJudy
on May 28, 2010 at 2:21 PM
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