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posted by
RomaKay
on May 25, 2010 at 7:41 PM
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What a delightful poem! Indeed, do not open the door in the night gown; brrrr! And I wait for the morning paper, you! Love you my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on May 24, 2010 at 8:04 PM
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Re: shobana
Thank you BCA, I'm glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on May 24, 2010 at 7:33 PM
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This poem has given me a smile on my face from ear to ear.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 24, 2010 at 1:57 PM
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I love your last note to yourself.
LOL. I find myself doing that and then hoping no one saw me.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 24, 2010 at 1:31 PM
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This set off this fleeting memory of House of 7 Gables (Hawthorne)and this suspended chap where the old guy is already dead sitting in his chair, and Hawthorne begins with the ticking of the clock, as if to wonder why this guy is not waking up, as he goes thru the whole description of the room. Hey, its time to get up but the guy is dead, so "why are you just stitting there?". I liked the juxtaposition of moments as stream of consciousness, but wondered about the abscence of an inner mirror--not that every subway ride needs one.
posted by
jfm32
on May 24, 2010 at 12:51 PM
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Fabulous poem, I felt like I was there
Though perhaps better to wear your nightie when opening the door than not
posted by
lionreign
on May 24, 2010 at 8:58 AM
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shobana
Z You give the poetic touch to plenty of action love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 24, 2010 at 5:19 AM
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ha..ha..lol. you are cute CC. It is a very serious lesson..ok. I do wear my bedroom slippers but that did not help much!
NO..meant to be a joke CC.
posted by
shobana
on May 24, 2010 at 12:37 AM
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Shobana
Well Shobana not being one to joke, I would advise you to wear slippers. I don't know if you meant this to be funny or a serious lesson to avoid being forgetful. One must assume the latter and has such it is a delightful learning process.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 24, 2010 at 12:29 AM
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Shobana
I loved your note to self and I didn't think it got cold where you are luv. Have a good week.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 23, 2010 at 10:18 PM
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Shobana, ha ha ha ha! i liked this note to self. is it winter?
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 23, 2010 at 9:17 PM
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Re: don't jump in the car and drive the kids to school or the husband to work
Hi Kabu, LOL, for sure it would be disastrous.
posted by
shobana
on May 23, 2010 at 7:29 PM
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don't jump in the car and drive the kids to school or the husband to work
either.....disaster will happen
posted by
Kabu
on May 23, 2010 at 7:05 PM
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dont wear your nightie and open the door
lol, that would be a big mistake
posted by
Tzippy
on May 23, 2010 at 4:02 PM
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this is real cute
posted by
Lanetay
on May 23, 2010 at 3:43 PM
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