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J The world stands still and your words are like still pictures of it. Excellent, love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 23, 2010 at 9:43 AM
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Know what you mean FSI, thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on May 23, 2010 at 5:07 AM
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As it goes
Well Shobana for the time we are here the world probably does stand still, be it a little bit more tormented. You have some interesting exploitable ideas, I am, trying to use big words to improve my spelling. Thank you for making your comments interesting and providing thought invoking poems. Thank you for the offer of a worm, but I have just had a banana.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 23, 2010 at 12:03 AM
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Hi Shobs,
Just superb, the word arrangement and the powerful way it is expressd. Well done, mere dost.
posted by
anib
on May 22, 2010 at 10:04 PM
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"Sometimes it seems that way"
That's quite a statement, applicable to everyone.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 22, 2010 at 9:11 PM
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Very thoughtfully woven together , I wish time could stand still for a long
time so that I may enjoy the moment that is this happy life.
posted by
Kabu
on May 22, 2010 at 6:36 PM
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hey paddy field!that reminds me of my home sweet home malaysia :)
posted by
ain_natasha
on May 22, 2010 at 6:17 PM
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Wonderful illustrative imagery! It does seem to be that at times! I liked the interweaving of the imagery, too! Love you, too my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on May 22, 2010 at 5:45 PM
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Shobana
A very interesting poem - you have connected work and the harvest to the way we experience time - and indeed that may well have been the beginning of our 'relationship' to time...and it does stand still sometimes, or at least slows to a crawl, for example when I am sitting in the dentist's chair...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 22, 2010 at 5:26 PM
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life does stand still but not long enough
posted by
Lanetay
on May 22, 2010 at 5:18 PM
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I have had plenty of moments where time just stands still. What an amazing feeling it is.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 22, 2010 at 4:10 PM
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As it goes
Time in a capsule as fire is to the molten metal flowing with word to agree upon as it goes. Nice write Shobana.
Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on May 22, 2010 at 4:04 PM
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True words Shobana... sometimes it stands still... others it goes too fast and it leaves us behind. Excellent work ! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 22, 2010 at 3:43 PM
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