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Re: Corncrake
Of course you are Fem, I always think of you running up and down ladders giving your instructions. Always nice to hear from you.
MB
posted by
C_C_T
on May 23, 2010 at 12:36 AM
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Re: The first one reads like the dream that woke me this morning
Well I did think that you might lodge a complaint Kabu, what life lines?
posted by
C_C_T
on May 23, 2010 at 12:32 AM
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Re: Taps
Hi Taps nice of you to say so
posted by
C_C_T
on May 23, 2010 at 12:30 AM
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Hi Shobana, I wouldn't want that second poem to leak out. There is a Nursing Home just up the road. I think on reflection, Oh, never mind, Birds are quite smart sometimes. Anyway a thing of beauty is a joy forever, someone stole that before I could say it. Thank you, be happy.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 23, 2010 at 12:21 AM
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Great work--both of them.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 22, 2010 at 11:45 PM
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Wow, CORNCRAKE
Both are EXCELLENT! I loved the word arrangement and the cadence with which it becomes a gripping read, and the fun of the second when the lines in women turn into beauty and the mirror cannot tell. Kudos!
posted by
anib
on May 22, 2010 at 11:38 PM
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Wow...that first poem, a walk alone... yes, is so fulfilling. And your second one....so very true. Love the depth of your writing.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 22, 2010 at 9:43 PM
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The first one reads like the dream that woke me this morning
I had wandered into a country best left covered in the sands of time
The second one I agree with completely I am proud of my life lines.
posted by
Kabu
on May 22, 2010 at 6:46 PM
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Corncrake
It is true when we venture into our minds we travel into unknow places but when we look again we realize we do have control and go on.
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and maturity for I know is the looking glass of what I see in my mirror of lifes experiences..No more dark hair for me only gray matter abounds but I still am pretty inside.. 
Loved your story poems Mr MB . Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on May 22, 2010 at 4:31 PM
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The second poem is just beautiful CC and very true but most don't appreciate the lines I'm afraid. It is lovely to walk into that expanse of your mind sometimes, you will be surprised at what you may find. Thanks so much for your visit and you know CC, the birds are talking right now and it is definitely as you say, who catches the first worm.
posted by
shobana
on May 22, 2010 at 3:27 PM
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Keep looking at the Sun..the darkness will vanish! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 22, 2010 at 1:54 PM
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Re: Sam
The sun came out today the second day of warmth. I think it is O.K to plant here now.Picked some Straws in the greenhouse and gathered young potatoes out of pots. Yes you will need a greenhouse again when you move. I take it you are not raising a complaint. Good
posted by
C_C_T
on May 22, 2010 at 11:23 AM
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I could so relate to the silence being intense! And I loved this so much for in it is great truth:
Do not demean yourself, walk tall.
The mirror really cannot show
the beauty that it does not know.
BTW, there is still snow on the mountain but it is at 5,000 feet! I can see it from the valley! I am nearly finished planting though! Are you all planted for the season? sam
posted by
sam444
on May 22, 2010 at 11:05 AM
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