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Sinome
Lovely, I liked that, 'just wish upon another star'
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 23, 2010 at 10:38 PM
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I am feeling exactly like this beautiful poem.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on May 23, 2010 at 9:50 AM
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Sinome
J Changes come fast. People come and go so quickly in our lives love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 23, 2010 at 9:35 AM
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sinome
Loss leaves a void that is seldom filled
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on May 23, 2010 at 9:01 AM
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its sad when love has died
posted by
Lanetay
on May 23, 2010 at 7:52 AM
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Wow, another gripping poem...sad, but wishing upon another star brings
new hope!
posted by
Ariala
on May 23, 2010 at 5:34 AM
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Sinome
Beautiful, poignant, sweet, reminiscent of ashes that will not ignite, nor will it it be wiped out of memory. Very concrete imageries, my friend, xoxoxoxo
posted by
anib
on May 22, 2010 at 10:00 PM
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Sinome
Would it be liberating to lose its memory once we have lost the love? It might be, but I would still choose to keep the memory, for moments of loneliness...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 22, 2010 at 5:18 PM
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It's very sad, Sinome!
It's heartbreaking indeed to feel a loss of love.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on May 22, 2010 at 4:53 PM
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Oh so many people look for that new star to wish upon.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 22, 2010 at 4:51 PM
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Wish upon another Star
Sinome..When we wish upon another star there is always hope and yes memories will sustain us and ashes to ashes dust to be blown about by the wind in our minds of time before but our words written tell us who you are and where you are going a new shining Star in the universe.
Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on May 22, 2010 at 4:36 PM
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Hi Sinome, really sad and melancholic. I hope you are ok and sometimes, I guess it is better to wish upon another star. Thanks so much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on May 22, 2010 at 3:49 PM
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such heartbreaking words formthe queen of love and gentlness.
posted by
Kabu
on May 22, 2010 at 1:41 PM
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Another Star
Oh, dear you are sad today Simone, you have some really nice memories to cherish. You write lovely poetry, it is always so perfectly presented. I had such a job today my blog would not paste correctly. Why do we do it?
posted by
C_C_T
on May 22, 2010 at 10:34 AM
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