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Shobana, I love the way a "couple of things" had me floating and meditating on the surrounding beauty life offers us all.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 22, 2010 at 8:54 PM
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Grand imagery and the close was so wonderful! I hope you are enjoying your weekend! Love you my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on May 22, 2010 at 2:40 PM
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That last verse really got my weekend mood going :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 22, 2010 at 1:58 PM
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I love to watch birds, and have really enjoyed that experience this last week. Lovely poem, thank you.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on May 22, 2010 at 9:35 AM
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How wonderful it is when one is enabled to relax like that.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 21, 2010 at 8:23 PM
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omg shobana the words fit perfectly there
i really like the last verse :)
posted by
ain_natasha
on May 21, 2010 at 5:44 PM
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SHOBANA
Beautiful!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on May 21, 2010 at 8:59 AM
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Couple of things
Could the little birds be arguing about whose turn it was to catch the worm?
No I don't think your birds would be like that Shobana. I suppose one wonders what is eventually between the stars and you don't mind breadcrumbs. It is different and appealing.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 21, 2010 at 8:55 AM
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Beautifully written
this is a treasure of a poem, it seems to catch something special and essential for me
posted by
lionreign
on May 21, 2010 at 6:48 AM
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birds do it, people do it, lets fall in love
posted by
Lanetay
on May 20, 2010 at 11:59 PM
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shobana, interesting juxtapositin of natural elements!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 20, 2010 at 11:17 PM
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shobana
R precious and cute love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 20, 2010 at 9:10 PM
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Very sweet Shobana :-) Good work! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 20, 2010 at 8:28 PM
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