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Thought provoking poem indeed .
posted by
afzal50
on May 18, 2010 at 6:02 PM
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I would love to see a world done with hate.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 18, 2010 at 3:51 PM
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shobana
M Writing poetry’s natural for your talent. In this one you show insight in man’s part in nature that leads to such unrest in the world love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 18, 2010 at 6:10 AM
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Hello, lustorlove - it does no matter what, yes.
posted by
shobana
on May 17, 2010 at 11:50 PM
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Shobana
A quite thoughtful poem with an underlying warning very well written Shobana, go to the top of the class. Thank you for your visit..
posted by
C_C_T
on May 17, 2010 at 11:42 PM
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life goes on year after year
posted by
Lanetay
on May 17, 2010 at 9:40 PM
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You are most welcome My Sam and yay!!! and make sure you enjoy your day
posted by
shobana
on May 17, 2010 at 8:06 PM
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Thank you for the birthday wish, and you are the first one my Shobana! I WISH you were here, too! It would make it a perfect birthday! Thank you once again Sweetie! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on May 17, 2010 at 8:04 PM
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Thank you so much Wiley John and of course you are right.
posted by
shobana
on May 17, 2010 at 7:51 PM
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Shobana
The sun will have the
final say...in about 6 billion years...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 17, 2010 at 7:51 PM
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Shobana
Very spiritual, and all we can do is pray for peace luv, and write beautiful poetry about it
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 17, 2010 at 7:50 PM
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This is an extraodinary fine way to describe in a few words the world today
I sometimessit and just pray....God what have we done.
posted by
Kabu
on May 17, 2010 at 7:16 PM
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shobana, i really dont know. i think we are headed for self-destruction, unless we cam seek peace with the rest of the world, find a way to quicken the nurturing of the 3rd world, and learn to cooperate. is democracy now showing its weakness, the selfish power grab over what's good for the all?
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 17, 2010 at 6:35 PM
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Shobana
This is an absolutely wonderful way to state where we are now. God is not happy with us and you have found a lovely way to say that... we press on toward the prize at the end of the day.
posted by
Justi
on May 17, 2010 at 5:46 PM
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I am going to go with great hope and say one day! I love this one , too! The last three were fabulous! Love you, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on May 17, 2010 at 5:04 PM
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Distant someday
Shobana, Very deep rooted and true. Blassings
Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on May 17, 2010 at 4:45 PM
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Superb write Shobana :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 17, 2010 at 4:03 PM
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