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You just get better and better.
What imagry presented itself to me as I read your well-crafted words.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 19, 2010 at 7:21 AM
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Many people have wondered if the feeling was mutual.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 18, 2010 at 4:33 PM
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posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on May 18, 2010 at 1:51 PM
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lovely
but so sad xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on May 18, 2010 at 6:58 AM
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Sinome
M It happens love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 18, 2010 at 6:34 AM
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You have woven feeling into this Simone and memory. It feels real so it is good work.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 17, 2010 at 11:07 PM
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Sinome
Love itself can sometimes be as tumultuous as a raging storm...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 17, 2010 at 8:00 PM
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I am always surprised even though I come here expecting
wonderful poetry to find that it continues to delight, indeed Wiley is right...you turn thunder and storms into sunshine for us all.
posted by
Kabu
on May 17, 2010 at 7:32 PM
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Sinome
You always can turn the rain to sunshine, thunder becomes the sound of a gentle drummer, you are able to orchestrate such sound and colour with words.Bravo
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 17, 2010 at 7:03 PM
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Sinome
Do you have a poetry book published? Will you be publishing one? Your work is so real and so beautifully done.
posted by
Justi
on May 17, 2010 at 6:51 PM
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Sinome, bravo! frankly i am beginning to believe that the things that we say aren't real, actually are. i think the power of these verses supercedes whatever wetness might come between two lost lovers, the clawing physical passion which leaves boredom and wanderlust in its wake. i think your love unfulfilled is so much more. it's an idea, he's an idea, you're an idea, and cannot be killed.
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 17, 2010 at 6:41 PM
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Such poignant imagery Sinome, I loved it. I'm sure amidst the rain and the thunderstorm you will be missed. Thank you for the visit .
posted by
shobana
on May 17, 2010 at 4:31 PM
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