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yes we are grain
s of sand and whitecaps!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 16, 2010 at 7:02 PM
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Sinome
This is a very interesting poem - you show the allure and bright colours of the seashore and the beach in a way that reminds me of a painting by Matisse - and then you remind us that we have really lost our innocence and that these are guilty pleasures! We have come to know that they are destructive, and that really there is also a strange emptiness about lying about on the beach...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 16, 2010 at 5:37 PM
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i love the beach- this is a great poem
as for my daughter's dog, where do we find the dog catchers? my daughter has given up and is sure the dog is dead somewhere. other than calling the shelter's she has been walking the streets for a few days looking.
posted by
Tzippy
on May 16, 2010 at 7:58 AM
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This is a great picture!
posted by
Nita09
on May 16, 2010 at 1:44 AM
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A beautiful image sinome, one that I am very accustomed to. thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on May 15, 2010 at 9:05 PM
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What an incredibly beautiful poem this is!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 15, 2010 at 5:51 PM
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$ The beach’s like a time gap love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 15, 2010 at 6:16 AM
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"A bad day at the beach is better than a good day anywhere else!"
posted by
Ariala
on May 15, 2010 at 4:27 AM
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As we say in the Midwest, "
posted by
Ariala
on May 15, 2010 at 4:27 AM
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Beach
I guess this sums us all up Simone, but I bet you use sun cream and wear sunglasses and never roast in the sun. I don't mind being in the sun if I am working, believing glow as ladies call it sweat, to me is self protecting, hopefully. I liked this poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 14, 2010 at 11:51 PM
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