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You set the mood with great precision
And your imagery is superb

posted by lionreign on May 18, 2010 at 6:46 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice indeed! Thanks for your visit and the link; will look at it. Nita.

posted by Nita09 on May 15, 2010 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

The mood in "Dark" I definitely feel it and "tarnished" just makes that sadness even greater. Had to read it twice.

posted by yellowrose55 on May 14, 2010 at 5:12 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent Carl :-)  I love your work :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on May 14, 2010 at 3:48 PM | link to this | reply