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Sinome
All things have a season. Yours and your lover have a life long season on your love. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on May 14, 2010 at 7:23 PM
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i am so in love with this :)
posted by
ain_natasha
on May 14, 2010 at 5:13 PM
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I am beginning to think there is much Truth in your words, Marta...
Well done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 14, 2010 at 2:57 PM
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I love the speaker's determination to remain in love!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 14, 2010 at 1:02 PM
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This is soooooo beautiful. I would like to print it, if it's ok.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on May 14, 2010 at 7:29 AM
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Excelently written
and I can't believe it either - I think that if it's really love, then it never ends
posted by
lionreign
on May 14, 2010 at 7:02 AM
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Love just ends
Brilliantly written Simone. I think love ends easily if one falls in love with someone else or believes themselves to be in love. In such a case it is shelved, but will return if things turn out not so rosy.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 14, 2010 at 2:33 AM
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You express thoughts so vividly and poignantly; just loved the last 2 lines--you're such a genius. Thanks very much for the comment--do visit us some day, and I will take you for a jungle safari to see herds of wild elephants, among others!
posted by
Nita09
on May 13, 2010 at 10:47 PM
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h Although melancholy it conveys the lost of feeling in love as freak as that wild blade of green grass among dried leaves love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on May 13, 2010 at 10:01 PM
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They say a lot of things about love Sinome, and you said the end of it so beautifully.
posted by
shobana
on May 13, 2010 at 8:29 PM
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Sinome
You always describe things so well and yes, sometimes love just ends. It happened to me after 20 years, not with a sigh but rather like a volcanic eruption of anger and injustice. Your lovely poetic description was much more sad.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 13, 2010 at 8:20 PM
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fabulous as always and the ending...so sweetly written.so........
Wiley and Kabu.LOL But someone put the end of love really well tome recently when she said that he and she were just passed their use by date.
posted by
Kabu
on May 13, 2010 at 8:18 PM
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