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Good poem. Is it a test? Could he be headed for very high things?
posted by
Justi
on May 13, 2010 at 12:26 PM
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Shobana
How beautifully written, lovely poetry about a very sad happening
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 13, 2010 at 9:33 AM
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Very touching poem
beautifully written by a very kind heart
posted by
lionreign
on May 13, 2010 at 7:03 AM
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Oh thank you Nita, I am glad you liked it and it is such a tempting offer, I will definitely make a trip there sometime.
posted by
shobana
on May 13, 2010 at 12:13 AM
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Very poignant and so thoughtful of you; excellent Shobana. Thanks for the comment--the forests and I are waiting for you!!
posted by
Nita09
on May 13, 2010 at 12:10 AM
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Thank you BCA - glad you liked.
posted by
shobana
on May 12, 2010 at 11:40 PM
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shobana
c A haunting way of reporting it poetically love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 12, 2010 at 11:31 PM
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Re: Taken at Will
Hi CC, yes I read a little bit on the new coalition government there. Hope it works out for you guys. I had a little bit of problems with my online connection too as you did yesterday. Thanks for liking my pure emotive poems.
posted by
shobana
on May 12, 2010 at 11:18 PM
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Taken at Will
A nice concept Shobana, you do at times write pure emotion. Our papers have been full of election facts and promises and I didn't see anything about the little Dutch boy, but the poem was very touching
posted by
C_C_T
on May 12, 2010 at 11:09 PM
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Re: very peaceful
Thank you Alaskan, I am glad to see you here. I read the summary of the horse boy, very interesting.
posted by
shobana
on May 12, 2010 at 10:56 PM
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very peaceful
posted by
Alaskan_Song
on May 12, 2010 at 10:52 PM
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Very thoughtful and excellent on behalf of the lil Dutch boy, Shobs
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posted by
anib
on May 12, 2010 at 9:33 PM
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Re: That last line lit light bulbs..lovely! - Ash
Thank you Ash - glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on May 12, 2010 at 8:09 PM
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That last line lit light bulbs..lovely! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 12, 2010 at 8:05 PM
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I like the idea of a new beginning! It fits where I am right now with my medication regime! Love you, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on May 12, 2010 at 7:54 PM
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A lot of sad and frightening memories will be in his waiting too lustorlove. Thanks so much for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on May 12, 2010 at 7:45 PM
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for sure he has FSI, how tragic. Thanks for the visits..and you haven't written anything.
posted by
shobana
on May 12, 2010 at 7:44 PM
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That poor boy has been through hell.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 12, 2010 at 7:08 PM
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what in deed is waiting for him
posted by
Lanetay
on May 12, 2010 at 6:22 PM
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That poor little boy and how lovely of you to write this for him
You are such a dear girl and I love this piece. Well done.
posted by
Kabu
on May 12, 2010 at 5:31 PM
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