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thank you FSI..the wise one.

posted by shobana on May 11, 2010 at 4:37 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you yellowrose and you read well the poetry.

posted by shobana on May 11, 2010 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent.... that's right, why not embrace everyone the way we embrace with our eyes the beauty in the sky. Love this one Shobana.

posted by yellowrose55 on May 11, 2010 at 4:35 PM | link to this | reply

We need to see past what is only skin deep...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 11, 2010 at 4:28 PM | link to this | reply

Re: To conclude words from skin
thank you for the visit cpklapper and yes, sometimes the poems speak in riddles,by taking shots of life situations and we can only hope that the ball reaches our court.

posted by shobana on May 11, 2010 at 4:16 PM | link to this | reply

Shobana
As many shades of people under that sky as flowers,all beauty to look at. Lovely poem

posted by WileyJohn on May 11, 2010 at 2:25 PM | link to this | reply

I get that a lot on the dance floor :)...
In reality, good dancers come from all nationalities..funny how people create stereotypes based on their own narrow views / experiences..well-crafted & thought-provoking verse in your own simple style, Shoba, best, Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on May 11, 2010 at 12:33 PM | link to this | reply

n Trial and Error

Shobana, people see the sky as it is. They sometimes think other things are so different from what they really are. We all came originally

from the same substance. It is like saying gold is silver. Fancy looking for Wit on coffee Hmm. Very thoughtful poem though.

posted by C_C_T on May 11, 2010 at 8:52 AM | link to this | reply

To conclude words from skin
makes about much sense as concluding you speak English because of how you move after take a shot or roll a ball.

Still they call the latter body English.


posted by cpklapper on May 11, 2010 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

Excellently said!
Perhaps if people paid more attention to who you are, rather than how you look the world would be a much happier place

posted by lionreign on May 11, 2010 at 7:36 AM | link to this | reply

Amen! We are truly the same when outside appearances are put to the aft! Very well stated my Shobana! Love you dear, too! Your sam

posted by sam444 on May 11, 2010 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

Hi, Shobana this surely is food for thought! Very well said! 

posted by shamasehar on May 11, 2010 at 4:39 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you lustorlove..lol glad you agree.

posted by shobana on May 11, 2010 at 12:06 AM | link to this | reply

shobana

U I guess that sweet’s universal. I read what I heard and liked that looks aren't important love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on May 10, 2010 at 10:52 PM | link to this | reply

yes that is so true

posted by Lanetay on May 10, 2010 at 10:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: Hello Shobs
I agree with you totally abanerjee.

posted by shobana on May 10, 2010 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Hello Shobs
Vastness, the unextended holds many, many mysteries for us, and even without understanding them fully, to also learn and imbibe from the blue heavens.

posted by anib on May 10, 2010 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Hello Shobs
Vastness, the unextended holds many, many mysteries for us, and even without understanding them fully, to also learn and imbibe from the blue heavens.

posted by anib on May 10, 2010 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Hello Shobs
Hello abanerjee, isn't it intriguing that there are no boundaries up in the skies? thanks so much for the visit and lovely comment.

posted by shobana on May 10, 2010 at 9:32 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Shobs
No borders or boundaries can be there in the skies; it is dispassionate. On earth, of course, all and everything is possible by man - the good, bad and ugly. Loved this thought-provoking poem

posted by anib on May 10, 2010 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

dsm
No, absolutely nothing to do with hatred of course, this is written in reflection of us sharing the same skies everywhere. Thanks so much for the comment.

posted by shobana on May 10, 2010 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply

americans have been behind the 8 ball on languages for all the reasons you know.  please accept that it is ignorant interest in reaching out and taking a chance -- esp with a beautiful woman --and not hatred.  fear maybe, but not hatred.  the haters dont ask.

posted by dsm_tchr on May 10, 2010 at 7:23 PM | link to this | reply

I f you cut me is my blood not red the same as yours.

posted by Kabu on May 10, 2010 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply