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This is beyond terrific. A song could be made from this poem alone, or a movie. I could see it all so clearly, with the way that you wrote.

posted by Darson on May 11, 2010 at 7:15 AM | link to this | reply

The day must always come to an end,
then begin anew. Very nice!

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on May 10, 2010 at 7:20 PM | link to this | reply

I hear ya, Marta...good one!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on May 10, 2010 at 6:12 PM | link to this | reply

Sometimes the days just run together.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 10, 2010 at 5:30 PM | link to this | reply

sinome,

posted by dsm_tchr on May 10, 2010 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

Tomorrow is never just another day. The next moment not just another moment. Hope my dear. For people can change. But hope shall not ly with people but with God. For even if the same old takes place in the world let not the same old take place in your heart. Let God have it and show you the glories even through the mundane that we see.

posted by PinkWeaver on May 10, 2010 at 1:07 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
I wish another day would bring warm weather, but at least this day brought your warming poetry luv.

posted by WileyJohn on May 10, 2010 at 11:53 AM | link to this | reply


posted by Syracuse_Pike on May 10, 2010 at 4:41 AM | link to this | reply

Another day

I suppose, Simone but if you can plaster it over with a few dreams and new thoughts perhaps it will remain in some one else's day and make that a bit more enjoyable. Liked this.

posted by C_C_T on May 10, 2010 at 3:58 AM | link to this | reply

Well put., M'lady
another day can seem so insignificant in the overall scope of things, yet so very dear to us. Just try to enjoy each one as much as you can.

posted by Raysongs on May 9, 2010 at 10:37 PM | link to this | reply

Ah yes, always hope for another day..thanks for the visit and hope you had a good time too.

posted by shobana on May 9, 2010 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

Just another day
Yes, tomorrow will be another day to mend our fences and defences. Loved this philosophical meandering xoxoxo

posted by anib on May 9, 2010 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply