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Sinome
h It’s a memorable poem that touches a person love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 9, 2010 at 6:13 AM
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Exquisite Sinome - Happy Mother's Day.
posted by
shobana
on May 8, 2010 at 8:29 PM
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Sinome
Beauty radiates from this pure love reminiscing, now only a memory of that remains and it so pains. Again, excellent! xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on May 8, 2010 at 6:31 PM
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I feel a mixture of emotions while reading this.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 8, 2010 at 5:45 PM
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Pure Excellemce!!
The Wind, wonderfully created!!
Thankyou !!!
DS
posted by
Dave_Scudde
on May 8, 2010 at 12:03 PM
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...this fantastic poem, apart from its bright and sudden images, draws its power from the fact that there was no love at all. only a dream of love, or the desire to be loved. you say, it was the reflection of the star only. only light traveling at the speed of light, from an unattainable light source, which is no longer in the spot it was when it first sent the original message of hoperays. only a dream, nothing there at all, except a truly gorgeous dream poem. i want to cry now.
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 8, 2010 at 12:00 PM
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you always write so nice one's...
posted by
Star5_
on May 8, 2010 at 11:55 AM
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The wind
I suppose there is a kind of contentment in sadness Simone, especially if it can be turned into something beautiful.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 8, 2010 at 11:46 AM
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Isn't love beautiful. Even when it seems that it is gone forever, the memory remains and glimpses of it are seen in moments we least expect.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 8, 2010 at 11:35 AM
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Sinome, this is very beautiful!
Sad, but full of heart, too.
posted by
Ciel
on May 8, 2010 at 11:25 AM
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