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I feel as though I am in that room, trying to write something myself.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 8, 2010 at 5:41 PM
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Such a vivid picture of the room...wonderful!
posted by
Nita09
on May 8, 2010 at 9:58 AM
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it's amazing that u say so much in so few words & touch my soul so deeply
posted by
Tzippy
on May 8, 2010 at 7:12 AM
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Sinome
CZ So you have a yellow room with green views. I guess it’s better than the white room with black curtains that Cream saw love. BC-A, . Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 7, 2010 at 9:41 PM
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Sinome
You'd turn any room into a pleasant scene luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 7, 2010 at 7:09 PM
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Quite a poem--in voice, rhythm, and direction. It raises for me the question how a 38 line poem can communicate so explitcitly a 5 page short story or a 2 hour movie script. But isn't poetry the shorthand of truth? I really liked this film.
posted by
jfm32
on May 7, 2010 at 6:05 PM
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...AND THO' THEY THINK THEY'RE IN A PLAY, THEY ARE ANYWAY!
No, that room is your mind but only poetically. It's really a feeling you get when you write. You interpret it as a power given you anthropomorphically; really it is just your creative reality. Wonderful!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 7, 2010 at 5:30 PM
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The pretty girl with the long dark curls and lots of wonder lived there didn't she. Be blessed and have a wonderful Mother's Day.
posted by
Justi
on May 7, 2010 at 2:31 PM
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very lovely poem
posted by
Lanetay
on May 7, 2010 at 1:52 PM
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That room
You
are that room.
joab
posted by
joab3
on May 7, 2010 at 11:50 AM
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Gorgeous, I think you are lucky to have that room
xoxoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on May 7, 2010 at 7:08 AM
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so deep.i like the refrain of the 'room' where they fit perfectly there.
posted by
ain_natasha
on May 7, 2010 at 4:22 AM
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Room
Very nice Simone
posted by
C_C_T
on May 7, 2010 at 3:17 AM
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posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on May 6, 2010 at 9:12 PM
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