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So beautifully expressed, made me thought of someone... someone special from the past...
posted by
Syracuse_Pike
on May 8, 2010 at 9:14 AM
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B{Z I guess that he’s someone to think about, love (and love). BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 6, 2010 at 8:18 PM
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The way in which you have set up "You" to separate the stanzas brings about a whole new personal dimension to the poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 6, 2010 at 8:06 PM
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Excellent work as always, Marta!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 6, 2010 at 6:12 PM
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we both know how much I adore your work...It just keeps at a fabulous
level.
posted by
Kabu
on May 6, 2010 at 6:10 PM
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absolutely gorgeous, sinome, what else can I say.
posted by
shobana
on May 6, 2010 at 4:20 PM
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Sinome
You have such tremendous passion for the quest maybe only you know. To be your own or even your friend is a sacred position. God bless you.
posted by
Justi
on May 6, 2010 at 3:02 PM
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how touching
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posted by
Tzippy
on May 6, 2010 at 2:11 PM
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This is a very sweet and touching poem.
If someone gave this to me, I'd probably just break down and cry. I love how the poem ends! A plus is the grade I'd give to you
posted by
clarerichard
on May 6, 2010 at 5:31 AM
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that is some powerful euphamisms! must be a son or daughter?
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 6, 2010 at 5:13 AM
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You
You never write a duff poem Simone, this is the art of presenting emotion as one would feel or has felt. I am trying to cut down on comments so I will say no more.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 5, 2010 at 11:52 PM
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Hi Marta
Powerful, poignant, full of sincere love, and so well expressed from the depths of the heart. Kudos! xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on May 5, 2010 at 9:35 PM
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whoever "You" is
is a very fortunate one indeed. Loved it !
posted by
Raysongs
on May 5, 2010 at 9:02 PM
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