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Hi Shobana
Came to paradise, to see this beautiful dream again.
posted by
anib
on May 8, 2010 at 6:40 PM
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What a wonderful concept
and a brilliant execution, you make me want to sleep walk
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2010 at 10:26 AM
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Shobana
A poem of languid dreamy travel...Beautiful...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 6, 2010 at 6:02 AM
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What a wonderful work
I love your choice of words especially this one, "Smile of miles"
By the way, I am excited to know that you're from Malaysia
Hi, I'm from Kuching, Sarawak
posted by
clarerichard
on May 6, 2010 at 5:26 AM
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Re: Ever since I came here to Canada and Wiley I feel as though I must be
Hi Kabu, and isn't that a wonderful thing after all that the two of you have been through, I think you deserve this happy lives together.
posted by
shobana
on May 6, 2010 at 12:41 AM
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Seems like an elaborate journey in sleep!
posted by
Straightforward
on May 6, 2010 at 12:30 AM
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Ha..ha ..LOLOL, why are you trying to be more sophisticated??? Oh dear, don't worry you can always joke on my poems CC. Thanks for enjoying it. I felt like that when I had to wake up at the wee hours of the morning today..
posted by
shobana
on May 6, 2010 at 12:22 AM
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Shobana
Shobana It is just how I feel when reading this poem, it is enjoyable. I could joke but I am trying to be more sophisticated.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 6, 2010 at 12:06 AM
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shobana
Wow, shobs, I so liked the style and the closed-eye waliking imagery. Beautifully done !
... I was down with high fever, in delirium almost. I am better today, somewhat debilitated. Thank you so much for asking. Missed you all.
posted by
anib
on May 5, 2010 at 9:50 PM
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This was very vivid imagery! I thought of mental somnambulism! Well done, indeed! Love you my Shobana Your sam
posted by
sam444
on May 5, 2010 at 8:27 PM
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shobana
v I love the peace and serenity of this poem love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 5, 2010 at 8:17 PM
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Sleepwalking can be at once frightening & exciting! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 5, 2010 at 7:42 PM
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Quite the relaxing state you have chosen to write a poem about.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 5, 2010 at 7:16 PM
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Ever since I came here to Canada and Wiley I feel as though I must be
walking in my sleep....dreaming...how can love and life be this happy this good.
posted by
Kabu
on May 5, 2010 at 4:31 PM
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I am afraid if I walked in my sleep it wouldnt lead to paradise
posted by
Lanetay
on May 5, 2010 at 4:23 PM
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I napped this afternoon and listened to our chimes outside the window and then woke up to read of;
"The living and the beauty of time, That moves in the direction of familiar chimes" Lovely
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 5, 2010 at 3:07 PM
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