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many thanks sam :)
posted by
ain_natasha
on May 6, 2010 at 4:43 AM
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The refrain set the whole in motion for me! I felt the end coming! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 5, 2010 at 7:57 PM
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thanks shobana :)
posted by
ain_natasha
on May 5, 2010 at 5:04 PM
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This so touching and beautifully said. excellent. Thanks for the visit and welcome.
posted by
shobana
on May 5, 2010 at 3:06 PM
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Re: Oh
i was having somekind of emotional breakdown when i wrote this.
thanks for dropping by! :)
posted by
ain_natasha
on May 5, 2010 at 3:03 PM
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Oh
The word "oh" fits perfectly to this comment and your poem.
I see, that I'm going to be the first person to leave a comment for your poem, and I take that as a pleasure.
This poem really touched me. I can't tell how or why. But maybe that's the good thing about the feeling I got when I finished reading.
Very beautiful poem. But still with some sadness I think. Good piece of poetry. ;)
kasper.
posted by
kasperhoe
on May 5, 2010 at 2:29 PM
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