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I love those crisp mornings you describe.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 5, 2010 at 8:03 PM
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a very fresh
poem
posted by
Lanetay
on May 5, 2010 at 6:40 PM
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Sinome
You always paint such gentle pictures of this earth, like the undulating grass, it makes for a peace filled evening luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 5, 2010 at 3:02 PM
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Your poetry is a voyage into beauty and wonder, thank you for sharing it xoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on May 5, 2010 at 7:58 AM
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This is so beautiful I could feel the crisp air and smell the Sea.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on May 5, 2010 at 7:38 AM
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you never cease to amaze me
with your descriptive imagery nature and emotion. good write, M'lady.
posted by
Raysongs
on May 5, 2010 at 6:16 AM
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Crisp morning
Very nice writing as always Simone, one where you should have been wearing a warm coat.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 4, 2010 at 11:00 PM
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Beautiful indeed...such a desire ~ just beautiful Sinome. xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 4, 2010 at 8:19 PM
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I love to watch the illumination of the end of night. Beautiful writing.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 4, 2010 at 7:25 PM
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Sinome
Oh what beautiful writing where the sun, moon and stars hide for the night... That big snuggly comforter on God's bed of eternity. Yes there we will find the other half of our souls just peacefully waiting for only each of us. God bless you.
posted by
Justi
on May 4, 2010 at 7:10 PM
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Sinome, disappointment is something we all must deal with daily. Great writing!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 4, 2010 at 6:59 PM
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One day we will cross the barrier and all longing will be over....your poem
brought thoughts to my mind not really of the poem but that sometimes is the beauty of reading.......I was left to ponder would I like to have an eternity of sunrises or an eternity of sunsets.....forme sunsets I think. You really are the best dear one.
posted by
Kabu
on May 4, 2010 at 6:53 PM
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