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"The sun is is bowing to the moon and the moon smiles back."
lovely :)
posted by
ain_natasha
on May 5, 2010 at 2:59 PM
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I can feel the intensity of all that focus on just him and you.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 4, 2010 at 6:24 PM
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Sinome
Loved that, especially the 'no heaven no hell' part luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 3, 2010 at 6:45 PM
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Sinome
J That’s the place to be. lol. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 3, 2010 at 4:56 PM
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Yes, no heaven, no hell... fond hearts tell...
posted by
Syracuse_Pike
on May 3, 2010 at 12:14 PM
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Great!
The first part conjured up an image of a Turner evening scene
posted by
malcolm
on May 3, 2010 at 10:51 AM
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There is heaven darling....reading your poetry each day is a glimpse
posted by
Kabu
on May 3, 2010 at 8:36 AM
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What a moment!
Stunning poem, sweetie, I am enthralled
posted by
lionreign
on May 3, 2010 at 7:27 AM
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Reading your poetry is pure heaven. Beautiful. Thanks so much for your visit and comment.
posted by
shobana
on May 3, 2010 at 3:32 AM
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is it true? will we find others as day turns to night? i hope so.
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 3, 2010 at 12:08 AM
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No heaven
Any thing is possible Simone and even if it isn't, what does it matter. If we are just for a moment in time allowed to touch the untouchable and it is felt as a source of comfort it is better than grief.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 2, 2010 at 11:45 PM
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I love this so much Sinome.. to be touched and tremble... yessssssssssssss
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on May 2, 2010 at 8:39 PM
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