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I love how you set up the imagery and then tied it all together! And sometimes we do get derailed! Wonderful poem! Love you, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on May 5, 2010 at 8:21 PM
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The railroad is an excellent metaphor for this thing called life.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 4, 2010 at 5:46 PM
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shobana
J So I see this view in a few places. I see it in my own life too. lol. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 3, 2010 at 4:52 PM
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sometimes we get off track usually to let a train pass
posted by
spiderfly
on May 3, 2010 at 1:48 PM
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Splendid irony here
posted by
malcolm
on May 3, 2010 at 10:51 AM
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sometimes I get derailed in my life
posted by
Lanetay
on May 3, 2010 at 9:00 AM
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Derailed
Shobana I have just written quite a few comments and And I can only think of Chug, chug, so rather than risk your displeasure , I will tell you that our railway was ripped up a few years ago, it was thought the car was the answer. So you see we are all derailed. She must not stick to a one way track. Your poem is quite visual and as usual your feelings are entwined in a garland around it.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 3, 2010 at 12:17 AM
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shobana, viewed from afar life seems so objective, natural, & acceptable!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on May 3, 2010 at 12:16 AM
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What a great poem... loved it! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 2, 2010 at 8:43 PM
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