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I can see it all very clearly. And, if I'm not mistaken, I believe I can smell the dew on the grass as it heats up under the sun. Delicious imagery.
posted by
Darson
on June 9, 2010 at 8:40 AM
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Thought I'd read this again Nautikos. Mondays are days I'd like to put on some cheerfulness..thank you for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on June 6, 2010 at 10:40 PM
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....I LIKE IT. CAN SEE THE ROBIN TUGGING AT THE WORM. Nice....!
posted by
Darson
on May 3, 2010 at 9:10 AM
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Very imaginative haiku too that yellowrose got you to write. Great Job..LOL, I cannot imagine anyone TELLING you to do something and you actually LISTENING Nautikos..oh dear..LOLOL.
posted by
shobana
on May 3, 2010 at 4:33 AM
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Beautifully expressed :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 2, 2010 at 8:34 PM
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What a beautiful morning. One doesn't need anymore words than that to get the full picture.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 2, 2010 at 6:30 PM
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I can picture that scene you describe.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 2, 2010 at 4:35 PM
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I really love this ...I must write one soon You are good.
posted by
Kabu
on May 2, 2010 at 4:28 PM
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I loved the tugging at the worm! KUDOS!!! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on May 2, 2010 at 2:39 PM
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Love it ~ when you speak Haiku Naut
Elyse (this one's a looker)
posted by
elysianfields
on May 2, 2010 at 12:31 PM
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I think I wanna be there right now...gorgeous.
Thank you Nautikos, you know I love and enjoy your writing.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 2, 2010 at 11:25 AM
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My God, Naut, it's beautiful !! You have such talent.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on May 2, 2010 at 11:15 AM
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