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I had to read this exquisite imagery once again! For the past two days you have been on the page I was reading and just as I was about to get to you, you disappeared! And so today I kept reading until I caught up to you! Jes has been in town and she gets my undivided attention! lol Love you my Shobana Your sam
posted by
sam444
on May 5, 2010 at 8:19 PM
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yes sometimes it can rain real good
posted by
Lanetay
on May 3, 2010 at 9:01 AM
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Outside it is never dull, never boring,
always changing, always enticing.
I must go out today....
posted by
TAPS.
on May 2, 2010 at 6:16 PM
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Very cool stuff again, shobana!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 2, 2010 at 5:39 PM
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Lovely poem - a garden paradise where love blooms - very nice!
posted by
janey_
on May 2, 2010 at 5:37 PM
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Shobana
Lovely and the only thing blooming here is your lovely poetry.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 2, 2010 at 4:21 PM
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Today was soft soft Spring rain,,,I hope the cold is over here dear one.
posted by
Kabu
on May 2, 2010 at 4:16 PM
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Those gardens you speak of are so full of life.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 2, 2010 at 4:15 PM
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Shobana
I haven't as much time right now to read but this is such a lovely poem. You live life as a poem, this is simple but exquisite. You feel life's beauty in all things. I applaude you for that. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on May 2, 2010 at 1:28 PM
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Shoba, amazing how you can write a lovely poem...
out of the simplest of things..I admire your vivid imagination! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 2, 2010 at 1:13 PM
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Shobana - visual - I can see the grass moving - spurting in growth. I can feel this rattle like my cheek next to the window pane~ This whole poem has such 'soft' but palpable feeling. I love the last lines - analogy of the bride. I'm hoping you had a beautiful weekend. xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 2, 2010 at 12:37 PM
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This is a fabulous poem! I would like to feel the window rattle like you describe as opposed to the car that goes by my house rattling everything with the bass so loud! lol Wonderful poem! Love you, too my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on May 2, 2010 at 10:48 AM
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I know this feeling
well and you have captured it beautifully
posted by
malcolm
on May 2, 2010 at 8:40 AM
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Fabulous poem Shobana specially because the "but inside" is implied all over it. I loved it. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 2, 2010 at 7:22 AM
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Outside
To be sure Shobana you live in a mystic world. Well some of the time. Anyway it is always pleasant to read your poems. You proffer happiness in some degree or idea. Well mostly. Keep your windows shut.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 2, 2010 at 7:17 AM
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