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Re: this is the most appropriate poem for today's average anyone
Thanks Tzippy
posted by
lionreign
on May 5, 2010 at 7:30 AM
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this is the most appropriate poem for today's average anyone
posted by
Tzippy
on May 4, 2010 at 7:46 PM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you sweetie, I'm glad you like it xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on May 3, 2010 at 7:24 AM
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Re: janey
Thank you! I am delighted to hear it
posted by
lionreign
on May 3, 2010 at 7:22 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Bill... relaxation is the one thing worth rushing to
posted by
lionreign
on May 3, 2010 at 7:12 AM
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Re: Seems like a regular day when I was working overtime...
Oh yes... only if you have hurried to that point then you have enough time to feel stressed and impatient with the wait
posted by
lionreign
on May 3, 2010 at 7:10 AM
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Re: Sam444
thanks Sam, I thought it was time for a change of pace
posted by
lionreign
on May 3, 2010 at 7:07 AM
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Re: A lovely take on stop and smell the roses . I like it.
Thanks Kabu!!
posted by
lionreign
on May 3, 2010 at 7:04 AM
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Re: Your first verse
Work is the biggest culprit for making us run when we should walk, I hope the weekend has treated you more gently
posted by
lionreign
on May 3, 2010 at 7:01 AM
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Re: Snowview
true... much more will be enjoyed too
posted by
lionreign
on May 3, 2010 at 6:56 AM
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Re: elyse
Thank you so much my friend, the weekend did indeed redeem all
posted by
lionreign
on May 3, 2010 at 6:52 AM
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Wise words my friend... We are all at times guilty of going too fast and not slowing down to notice the beauty of Life... Wonderful poem as always sweetie. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 2, 2010 at 8:49 PM
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thoroughly enjoyed your poem - loved the pace and movement
posted by
janey_
on April 30, 2010 at 9:04 PM
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lionreign
B I like the way that you rush us in this relaxed context. I’m going to sit on my bottom line. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
posted by
BC-A
on April 30, 2010 at 8:35 PM
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Seems like a regular day when I was working overtime...
and the funny part was, sometimes you hurry up and just wait for something or the other :)..oh well..nicely captured! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 30, 2010 at 6:54 PM
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What a great rhythmic, fast paced poem that was so fun to read! And a perfect message at the end! Have a self paced weekend! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 30, 2010 at 4:17 PM
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A lovely take on stop and smell the roses . I like it.
posted by
Kabu
on April 30, 2010 at 3:28 PM
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Your first verse
sums up how I've been feeling all month and your second is how I hope to feel for at least the duration of this weekend...
posted by
malcolm
on April 30, 2010 at 10:30 AM
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Very relevant advice--more will be achieved if we slow down.
posted by
Nita09
on April 30, 2010 at 10:29 AM
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LionReign - wow this is palpable with anxst and hurry in mind - ah but the busy---busyness of the day is swirling - Look up for Friday is here!!!! Redemption is nigh ~
'gather thy peace' ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 30, 2010 at 9:15 AM
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