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I've read this through a few times just to take it all in... not sure in whom I side. Not sure what to think. Sitting in thought, pondering what he did or didn't do. Pondering is she stubborn or finally standing up for herself. Pondering... Maybe we see what in part is in our own life? Very intriguing. Thanks
posted by
PinkWeaver
on May 1, 2010 at 12:04 AM
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Gosh, what an ending!
posted by
Straightforward
on April 30, 2010 at 11:49 PM
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Re: E. E.
E.E. you wouldn't believe what I have to do to even get an audience, they are so diverse in character, although quite easy to get on with if one just observes. C.C.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 30, 2010 at 11:47 PM
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Re: SometimesI feelthat behind those lace curtains of yours lurks characters
Hi Kabu, One day I am going to look behind those curtains and I will try and find out, you will be the first to know
posted by
C_C_T
on April 30, 2010 at 11:42 PM
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Re: Sam
I am sure she is not overweight Sam,
posted by
C_C_T
on April 30, 2010 at 11:40 PM
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Re: CORNCAKE Bill
Yes it crosses it sometimes Bill
posted by
C_C_T
on April 30, 2010 at 11:39 PM
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Re: Janey
Yes Janey it is the same everywhere I'm afraid.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 30, 2010 at 11:37 PM
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I love the tension between the two - very well done.
posted by
janey_
on April 30, 2010 at 9:24 PM
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CORNCAKE
B There’s a fine line between creativity & hurt sir. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
posted by
BC-A
on April 30, 2010 at 8:52 PM
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I knew he was in trouble when he brought up the waist! lol This was a stirring read, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 30, 2010 at 3:21 PM
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SometimesI feelthat behind those lace curtains of yours lurks characters
with wonderful stories to tell; I catch a glimpse, a moment is revealed the mist or lace lifts slightly. This poem brought all these feelings to me.
No I ain't a concellor just an old nurse with experience and learning in phsych nursing so ut all amkes me an interfering pain in the rear end. You don't need to grovel....I enjoy thrust and pary.
posted by
Kabu
on April 30, 2010 at 9:41 AM
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Ah - this touched my heart. Sometimes 'spirits' will dance before us - sometimes be right before us and we only linger with thoughts (remembrance) so 'still' ~ This is frankly, one of my favorites of yours C.C. ~ I read and am moved. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on April 30, 2010 at 9:01 AM
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