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Oh my dear how you spoke to me. It made me smile and get that giddy feeling inside. It's like I wrote these words without a finger of type. Just absolutely wonderful! If only... 
if only my dear... if only... a sigh of yeah I'll sit on these words and this feeling. Cause that is what is worth it. Thanks
posted by
PinkWeaver
on May 1, 2010 at 12:10 AM
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definitely a rare find indeed
posted by
Lanetay
on April 30, 2010 at 7:56 PM
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Wow, I'm jealous :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 30, 2010 at 6:49 PM
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That's what love does to us .
posted by
afzal50
on April 30, 2010 at 5:16 PM
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A wonderful feeling it is when we find "The One."
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 30, 2010 at 1:32 PM
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That tingle, indeed and the senses do go blind! What a fantastic poem! I love it! KUDOS! And I love you, too my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on April 30, 2010 at 1:18 PM
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Poignantly beautiful! Thanks for the excellent FW! Have a good weekend!
posted by
Nita09
on April 30, 2010 at 10:39 AM
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My weekend
has started on an even brighter note after reading this. Simple and so effective. Quite beautiful. Thanks
posted by
malcolm
on April 30, 2010 at 10:39 AM
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How tender and loverly that memory - this is beautiful and yes, I would imagine that would render the 'senses' blind - or stunned. Have an absolute great weekend Shobana. xoxoxo Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 30, 2010 at 9:53 AM
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Shobana
Lovely, the flower was a good beginning lu, Have a fine weekend
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 30, 2010 at 9:34 AM
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Senses Blind
Shobana, I hope his little heart was not broken at such an early age. No I think the flower was accepted graciously, I don't think you would have been so cruel as to destroy his little world. What a kind poem, keep those tiny candles alight.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 30, 2010 at 4:00 AM
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Lovely lines & imagery! You have a great weekend too!
posted by
shamasehar
on April 29, 2010 at 10:20 PM
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shobana
j I guess that poems are like flowers love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 29, 2010 at 10:19 PM
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Beautiful poem Shobana, as always but this one is special in that it shows a part of you I had not seen... that shy smile still lingers in my mind as I imagine you watching him watch you :-) Lovely. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 29, 2010 at 9:24 PM
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You have a wonderful weekend too love.
posted by
Kabu
on April 29, 2010 at 9:12 PM
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