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Re: Re: E.E.
Major - I think it's all ~superbly covert - not to worry ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 30, 2010 at 8:57 AM
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I would love to harness the power of the second poem! So exquisite! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 30, 2010 at 5:36 AM
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Re: E.E.
You have an uncanny sense of digging up, no I won't say cans of worms, perhaps memories that are well hidden. I am trying to be nice today and I don't want to grovel anymore than I have already. Perhaps no one reads these replies A true story a Bank manager was terrified
he was under the Japanese invasion and he had unwittingly transfer a large amount of the Banks cash to another country. He didn't know if he should confess to the General and throw himself open to an unlikely reprieve, or say nothing and take a chance. Well he lived to tell the tale and perhaps that is a good way to carry on. C.C.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 30, 2010 at 3:39 AM
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Kabu
I am becoming like our Prime Minister saying things I didn't mean to. Of course you are a lovely person grovel, grovel. Such nice shoes, it is only a form of self defence
posted by
C_C_T
on April 30, 2010 at 3:22 AM
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Re: Fantastic ride, Corncrake!
I dig you Raye, I like to make sure the claws are pulled.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 30, 2010 at 3:18 AM
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Re: I would love to take a ride like that too but ...no I have no wish to be a
I think you have probably ridden enough Tigers,
Kabu and don't be a baby.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 30, 2010 at 3:17 AM
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Re: Shobana
Yes it is silly to write two poems Shobana, I just started doing it and did not think anymore about it, perhaps I shall burn out. You see I have to have a Muse, for softies, I could tell a story about a short space adventure where this magnificent creature sits in a furnished cell and is equipped with a long sensuous tail.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 30, 2010 at 3:14 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
According to the law of physics Bill.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 30, 2010 at 2:36 AM
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CORNCAKE
j Give away what you see. You can’t what isn’t there. That’s reason sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 29, 2010 at 11:00 PM
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CC - I loved the tiger in the poem - such brilliance you write. You know as I read the 1st poetry, I get all ready with a comment and then when I get to the second poetry, the comment is forgotten.... I read your comment yesterday and I hope you keep all the "advice" I give you carefully - really...lol and if I don't answer any of your questions, it is only because I forget to. sorry. "The advice" poems are just inspirational poems CC - sometimes a reaffirmation to me.
posted by
shobana
on April 29, 2010 at 7:38 PM
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I would love to take a ride like that too but ...no I have no wish to be a
snack......and lace....keep the whispy lace it creates a sense of mystery in this poem, a smile an erotic touch but always leaving a question unanswered. Loved them both today my friend.
posted by
Kabu
on April 29, 2010 at 12:02 PM
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Fantastic ride, Corncrake!
Lace be a wispy veil, energy of eyes the motion holding hearty and hale - my take.
posted by
Katray2
on April 29, 2010 at 11:26 AM
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Lady of Lace is touching ~ has me reaching for the sunlight through the lace – very preciously deep CC while TIGER ~ (grrrrr) Tiger showing its underbelly sounds approachable – committing to being with one or 'sharing ' with one is (could be) a risk albeit a surrendering for Love – I thought committance was more of a ‘bear’ ~
to know me CC – is to understand, I like to read and re-read and let go of my imagination while so – E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on April 29, 2010 at 10:18 AM
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