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Wow!!  Some amazing verse has been contributed!

posted by calia14 on April 29, 2010 at 2:53 PM | link to this | reply

Here is my humble contribution. sammie

 

Each victory symbolic of desire’s need
to reach the end, the final conquest of
a trek to ease the mind, to plant the seed
that grows among the ferns; below the Dove.

posted by sam444 on April 29, 2010 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply

As always looking forward to the results.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 28, 2010 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply

Alone, we drudge through the pulling mire
Inching forth toward what we desire
Sometimes helping one another along
At times getting trampled by the throng
and as we go we bring with us
all that we are... all that we love
knowing  that as time goes by
what is not real will fall by the side
and so,  we walk through clouds
through water, through ice, through fire
just to find out that we have doubts
and after all we are just tired

posted by Sinome on April 28, 2010 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: calia, great idea, good poem. Possible malapropism 'mires'. Pl is mire.
ty!  I will fix it.

 


posted by calia14 on April 28, 2010 at 5:54 PM | link to this | reply

calia, great idea, good poem. Possible malapropism 'mires'. Pl is mire.

posted by dsm_tchr on April 28, 2010 at 11:28 AM | link to this | reply